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Thomas Hobbes
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20.  Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 8:49 pm Post subject: |
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| Pakwan Kenobi wrote: | | videoCWK wrote: |
I'm still trying to find out who made that...
And I'm suprised that I was put there instead of some guy I saw on some other boards (or someone who was like him...). He said that if the people there didn't stop deleting his threads, he'd call AOL and they'd delete the boards and then go to the admin's houses and take their AOL away (they didn't use AOL). He also threatened to call the FBI. It was funny. |
(1) You don't begin a sentence with "And".
(2) "AOL" is a singular noun, and so the colloquial contraction "they'd" should be "it would". A better suggestion would be to add the words "some staff members of" before "AOL", because the pronoun would then be correct.
(3) As there is only one "admin" mentioned, and assuming it is the "admin" and not the "houses" of the admin that owns the "AOL", ony HIS or HER AOL can be taken away, since "admin" is a singular noun.
(4) Since houses do not use AOL, and since people such as the aforementioned "admin" use AOL, then you should have said "(he or she didn't use AOL)".
English, MFer. Do you speak it? Do not criticize people's spelling or grammatical mistakes unless your usage of the English language is perfect. Change your location to "glass house", please.
kthxbai
That last bit was for you, in your native language, to improve your comprehension. |
Punctuation is usually included inside the quotes.
For example: John Q. Example said, "I believe that the period goes inside the quoted phrase or entity, like this."
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Pakwan Kenobi
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| 21. Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 2:00 am Post subject: |
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Malice got the extra credit question. Good job. 
Oh, damn. That was a sentence fragment. OMG TEH GR4MM4R C0PZ R H33R?!!!!!11111!1!1
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Thomas Hobbes
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| 22. Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 11:10 am Post subject: |
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Ahaha, you win at life Cynan.
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Radix
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| 23. Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 1:30 pm Post subject: |
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| Malice of BluR wrote: | | Punctuation is usually included inside the quotes. |
Only in American. |
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Thomas Hobbes
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| 24. Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 5:07 pm Post subject: |
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Really?
I never realised that.
Hehe. <3
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Bringer of Death
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| 25. Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 12:51 pm Post subject: |
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Do you know how incredibly retarded it looks when I quote Radix, "Only in American?" Radix isn't asking the question, I am.
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