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0. PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2005 7:39 pm    Post subject: Check out my edits Reply with quote

im kinda new at makin edits, but ive made a few.http://itgfreak.com/edits.php?author=755 so check em out and rate em and leave a comment, i know my charlene is just stupid, that was my 1st, and i thought my zodiac was dumb but apperently like 3 of my friends liked it.......... im also making a really good edit to land of the rising sun that will be up soon, also this thread can be used for other people who want to show off their edits
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1. PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2005 8:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Remember December = Abysmal

Zodiac = ZOMG ARE YOU SERIOUS

Infection = Empty and Uninspired


Remember December Review - When I was playing this on my CF, I was wondering what must've been going through your mind when you incorperated the 89045784 16ths with jumps +551905 16ths. The 24ths (correct me if I'm wrong about the note) were completly off beat and I had a VERY hard time even finishing the edit it was just THAT bad. I don't mean to sound like a complete jerk, but RD was just......no 3/10

Zodiac Review - The Utopia style right steps frustrated me and it seemed like only the up and right arrows made up the first 1/4 of the edit. Steps were insanely off sync in places and I heard some extremely strange rhymes with the assist tick on while playing. I'm STILL wondering what was going through your mind when you put almost 20 32nds in a row for the down and left and right arrows. That looked like Pandy Ex. on blender selected 100 times. Zodiac was ZOMG horrible. 2/10

Infection Review - The whole beginning of the song felt empty and the up and right arrows were overused. The rest of the song felt uninspired. Like someone put it on record and just tapped arrows while watching TV. Some ryhmes were akward and some section were just completely off beat. Also a bad edit. 3.4/10
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I'll have my Delirium edit up for review in a little while.
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2. PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2005 8:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This guy has a horrible tendeny of repeating the same arrow/arrows. Horrible.
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3. PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2005 9:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

gimme a break, these are my 1st edits, and in remember december those 16th notes go with the song, besides, i didnt really spend much time on most, and there is a trick to those steps in zodiac, my friend got 95%, i have a land of the rising sun that i think will be the best ive made, and not poopy liek most of mine, what did u think of m hip hop jam, all my friends liked it
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4. PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2005 6:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

T-Bone.. wrote:
gimme a break, these are my 1st edits, and in remember december those 16th notes go with the song, besides, i didnt really spend much time on most, and there is a trick to those steps in zodiac, my friend got 95%, i have a land of the rising sun that i think will be the best ive made, and not poopy liek most of mine, what did u think of m hip hop jam, all my friends liked it


Spending lots of time on edits is what can make them or break them. I'll play Hip Hop Jam when I get the courage to face death in the eye another time.
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5. PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2005 8:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i have an edit i made the other day. i am very pleased with it.
if you play it correctly, you do not have to double step or double tap any arrows. biggrin.gif

http://itgfreak.com/edits.php?author=47
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6. PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2005 11:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

cfusion, are you supposed to use your left then right foot on the same arrow for some of those runs? Is that what you were going for?
If you don't understand my question, think of what a lot of people started doing on the end of MAX300 after Yasu's AAA video came out. Alternating feet on the same arrow.
Ditto for the long single arrow runs of CSFIL~SM~.
Is that what you were going for?
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7. PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2005 12:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yes, thats what i was going for. i got the original idea a long time ago playing celebrate nite on oni and have made a handfull of edits with that kind of step in it since. this is my first edit for itg though, so i wanted to make it a bit more tricky than it seems. every time there is a set of mines is a switch step (other than the end though, which is all mines). with the added mines, it makes it more difficult to get away with doing it any other "standard" way. i always prefer fluid motions to double stepping in songs like this, and its a neat thing that most people wont realize how to do (though, in itg, the mines help). my favorite edit in this style i made for think ya better d and it had a lot of complex turns with the switch stepping and it turned out to be very fun when played correctly. at face value though, the steps for that edit would have been a good 6 or easy 7.
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8. PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2005 2:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

My brother and I both tried it on our CF's and it was HILARIOUS trying to avoid those mines while trying intentionally to the edit the incorrect way. That served for some great laughs. Great edit when done correctly though. 7.8/10
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9. PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2005 4:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, then, how about my edits?

http://itgfreak.com/edits.php?author=83

They're labeled as though they were "replacement" steps for the corresponding song/difficulty, and are usually intended to be of similar difficulty, though they're often quite different in style.

EXPERT:
Da Roots - Follows the violin quite closely most of the time, harder than the normal expert steps.
July - Follows the piano and synth parts the best I could. Less tiring 1/16ths, but more complex rhythms, turns and mines
Kagami - This one is... kind of strange. I like it more than the real expert steps, but less than most of my edits. :?
Mythology - Feels more like a 10 to me, and less like "have some jumping... whoops, suprise 11 rape!"... still lots of runs at the end, though
Remember December - I just had an idea of "What if the 'gibberish' parts had 'gibberish' steps ala EotC?" and then "Isn't double-stepping hard with mines?" >E1.gif
Touch Me - Basically, it's just a bit harder than the normal expert steps... I guess. :S

HARD:
Euphoria - One of my favorites. I basically just followed the rhythms in the melody closely, but removed steps that were too difficult for a "hard" chart.
July - Similar to the above, but with July.
Pandemonium - Harder than most of my expert edits, heh. Follows the music pretty well, but I think I kind of fudged a few parts.
Walking on Fire - Follows the music a lot more than the original hard chart. Occasionally, I sync to weird background sounds to throw you off. E10.gif
While tha Rekkid Spinz - Follows some of the simpler rhythms, and embellishes a bit. Fun. biggrin.gif Might be tough for a 7 though? :S
Zodiac - Sort of a "training" edit. Follows the music, but focuses on a lot of different techniques one at a time.

So, yeah! Give 'em a try. happy.gif



T-Bone: I gave a look at a lot of your songs, but I think I'll review them as a whole.
Your rhythms sometimes seem to follow the music well enough, but a lot of the time notes are missing, offset, and so on. (For example, in your Remember December edit, almost everything in the triplet section was off.) Your runs are uninspired, often having a lot of repetition of two arrows, intermingled with a lot of mindless and very difficult turning or double-stepping. Your usage of mines and hands is haphazard, and there's no reason for those inane 1/64th note mine-piles you seem to be so fond of. They also tend to vary widely in difficulty, with long slow portions intermixed with 1/16th double-stepping, or other craziness like that.

cfusion: Your edit is very interesting, and makes use of its concept well, and doesn't let that get in the way of the music, IIRC. Nicely done.
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10. PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2005 5:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok, can someone give my edits a try and review them here? I currently only have my freshly made Kagami 12 block edit uploaded. However, I'd like to get some early feed-back.

http://itgfreak.com/edits.php?author=665
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11. PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2005 9:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

well, i took down the ones that people didnt liek as much, and i will make them better, and i finished my land of the rising sun edit, try that one out, i didnt know whether to rate it a 9 or a 10
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12. PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2005 11:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alezay wrote:
Ok, can someone give my edits a try and review them here? I currently only have my freshly made Kagami 12 block edit uploaded. However, I'd like to get some early feed-back.
Hm... I haven't had a chance to play it, but it looks a lot like the normal Expert steps... and thus has a lot of the same problems. Also, looks more like an 11 than a 12, even with the run-from-hell during the slowdown.
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Alezay wrote:
Ok, can someone give my edits a try and review them here? I currently only have my freshly made Kagami 12 block edit uploaded. However, I'd like to get some early feed-back.
Hm... I haven't had a chance to play it, but it looks a lot like the normal Expert steps... and thus has a lot of the same problems. Also, looks more like an 11 than a 12, even with the run-from-hell during the slowdown.


It mostly follows the same beat the Expert steps do because I couldn't find anything in the background to follow. I was thinking about making the entire slowdown a run-from-hell but it would've been rediculous. I'm not sure about these "problems" you talk about. 98% of the steps flow directly into the next, with a few crossovers here and there. There are some flow-breaks, but they are minor and still easy to get to. I'm not sure about it being a 12 either. I'll re-difficulty it later on today after I play it at the arcade and see what I think.
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I'm not sure about these "problems" you talk about.
The problem with the original expert steps is that they don't really follow anything in the music. Just like you said, it's hard to find actual rhythms to follow in that song. :S I tried for my "expert" edit, but there were some parts where I just couldn't find anything.
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15. PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2005 1:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, here are MY edit steps, give 'em a try:

http://itgfreak.com/edits.php?author=151

Also note that, yes, My edit for The Game does have a rapid fire "hit 16th's with your hands" part in it. Oh, and I'm going to take out the some of the horrible hand parts in that one and replace them with something else.

But, tell me what you think.
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16. PostPosted: Sat May 14, 2005 12:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ive had my land of the rising sun up for ahwile and no feedback, i actually think this one is alright, play it someone????
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17. PostPosted: Sat May 14, 2005 6:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

T-Bone.. wrote:
ive had my land of the rising sun up for ahwile and no feedback, i actually think this one is alright, play it someone????


That LOTRS edit actually wasn't bad at all. There were still some strange rhymes and hard to get to steps during 16th runs. But it wasn't really a factor. I did like the HotN style step jumps with mines part. And I did enjoy this edit while I played it.

8.2/10
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where do the file appear when you save it
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nickynfs wrote:
where do the file appear when you save it


Be more specific.
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