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ddrlacrosse
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20.  Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2003 2:29 pm Post subject: |
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| lhiannonsidhe wrote: | GottaDDR2nite,
I was bored I took the liberty of changing your script to a proper format, hope you don't mind. I didn't change the actual script at all.
INT; Day. Living Room
Alex is sitting on couch, watching television. Phone rings, Alex Answers
Alex: Hello?
Jason (On Phone): Hey Alex, wat'cha doing?
Alex: Oh hey Jase, nothing. Why?
Jason (On Phone): Me and the guys are going to the arcade. You wanna
come?
Alex: Um well thanks but it's ok.
Jason (On Phone): Awh man well ok, if you change your mind you'll know
where we'll be. See you
Alex: Bye
Alex hangs up the phone and picks up the remote control.
Alex's Mother (Offscreen): Alexander, honey, could you help me clean the
kitchen Unless your busy,
Alex: Sorry mom, I'm going to meet the guys at the arcade.
Love you bye
Alex leaves the room in a hurry
EXT; Day, Front Yard of house.
Alex climbs onto a bicycle and rides off.
INT; Day, Arcade
Alex enters and gives a dollar to the clerk at the counter, who returns 4 quarters.
Alex looks around for several moments, before spotting Jason and Joey playing Dance Dance Revolution. Alex approaches them as the game ends. Jason wins.
Alex has an awed look.
Jason: Good game Joey. You want to play again?
Joey (Out of breath): uh maybe later man.
Alex (Suprised): What was that? That was like the
coolest. Jase, what is this?
Jason wipes Sweat off his face
Jason: Oh hey Alex, glad you could make
What this? It's DDR
Alex: DDR?
Jason: You been living under a rock man? DDR, its short for
dance dance revolution. It's a dancing
simulator, the music plays as you try to hit arrows to
match the ones on the screen. You never seen it, or
what??
Alex: Well I don't really come to the arcade much, I stick to
consoles. But it be really great if I could learn.
Jason: I could teach you.
Alex: Whoa, really? Ah man thanks. Yeah you could be like my
sensi.
Jason: Just 'cause I'm Asian dosent mean im some karate
master and am a sensi ok?!
Alex (mimicking an Asian accent):Yes masta
Alex Bows in respect
Jason: Oh boy. |
that would make a cool advertisement for ddr, but for a movie, it sounds kinda cheesy
a ddr movie itself wouldnt be a great idia... i agree with:
| Kawaii Usagi! wrote: | | The only kinda of DDR movies that work are videos of people playing DDR doesn't need a storyline, we all play anyway.. |
as long as there are good people at ddr, that have fresh idias for FS, i think i'm fine. |
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GottaDDR2nite
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| 21. Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2003 6:38 pm Post subject: |
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oh thanks i dont know how to actually write a script  , just know what i want in it. |
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Captain Canada
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| 22. Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2003 8:21 pm Post subject: |
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| GottaDDR2nite wrote: | well the storys main chacrter is a guy, but there is a love intrest and their is a girl freestyler. so girls do play ddr in this stroy for sure. well this is the beginnging. (oh im sorry to ddrfreak for using their name, i will probaly have to delete it later) but in the meantime tell me how you like an if i should change anything. -xcuse me for any typos-
Its Friday afternoon, school ended a couple of hours ago. The weekend has began for And while most guys our out getting ready for a date or a football game there are a certain few that go against the crowd, and follow their passion and dance. These are DDR FREAKS.
In a cozy home in the living room sits a young man on a couch. He seems bored flipping through the channels. Suddenly the phone rings. RING!
Boy: Hello?
Caller: Hey Alex, watcha doing?
Alex: Oh hey Jase, nothing. Why?
Jason: Me and the guys are going to the arcade. You wanna
come?
Alex: Um well thanks but its ok.
Jason: Awh man well ok, if you change your mind youll no
well be. See you
Alex: Bye -hangs up phone-
Alex grabs back the remote and continues to channel surf.
Ladys voice: Alexander, honey, could you help me clean the
kitchen Unless your buis
Alex: Sorry mom, Im going to meet the guys at the arcade.
Love you bye -he rushes outside and takes off on his ten
speed to the arcade-
At the arcade.
It seems like any other arcade. You got your fighting games. Your racing, the shooters. A few virtual reality games, and your ticket makers. But one game separates this arcade from others
Alex walks in looking for his friends he cashes a dollar and looks around. As he walks he sees one of his friends from behind and other game. He walks towards him, but then he see the most amazing thing ever. Jason and Joey are both playing dance dance revolution. Jason I s a tall Asian boy with a short hair cut. Joey is a short stubby guy, with a even shorter hair cut. They both move their feet as fast as they can to finish a Paranoia mix. But in the end Jason moves his feet better then joey as the score reads A to Joeys C.
Alex stands there in awe, he cant believe what e has just seen.
Jason: Good game Joey. You want to play again?
Joey: -trying to catch breath- uh maybe later man.
Alex: _jaw dropped_ What was that? That was like the
coolest. Jase, what is this?
Jason: Oh hey Alex, glad you could make -he wipes sweat off
his face- What this? Its ddr _with duh look_
Alex: ddr?
Jason: You been living under a rock man? DDR, its short for
dance dance revolution. -shrugs- Its a dancing
simulator, the music plays as you try to hit arrows to
match the ones on the screen. You never seen it, or
what??
Alex: Well I dont really come to the arcade much, I stick to
consoles. But it be really great if I could learn.
Jason: I could teach you.
Alex: Whoa, really? Ah man thanks. Yeah you could be like my
sensi.
Jason: Just cause Im Asian dosent mean im some karate
master and am a sensi ok?!
Alex:-blink blink- _in Chineses accent_ Yes masta - Alex
puts his hands together and bows-
Jason: -rolls eyes- oh boy. |
No.
Unless you have a wallet that says Bad Mother Fucker on it.
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Darkjolt1
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| 23. Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2003 10:11 pm Post subject: |
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Ramen King
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| 24. Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2003 10:49 pm Post subject: No |
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No... just no...
Please.... Someone, make the hurting stop...
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oximoron
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-=*Young_DDR_Freak*=-
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| 26. Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2003 1:44 pm Post subject: |
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At first I thought it was kinda lame...but I guess it could work. It'd have to have some love in it or something...some kid ditcvhes his friends to play DDR..i dunno im not a writer!!!
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urr
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| 27. Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2003 9:25 am Post subject: |
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ok
This is my idea.
Boy plays ddr, decides he loves it, decides to be the best. Then about 8 months later the boy can max ten footers. He decides to go to a tournament in Maine and he lives in California. He travels and meets all these new people on the way and....the tournament was cancelled before he got there and when he got there, he could say one thing. "SON OF A doggy!" *roll credits*
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