DDR Manga 2-- The 10K Commotion

ADHD Goten · Trick Member Joined: 16 Jun 2002 Location: Where am I?!

Did you stop using MSN Messanger, Makoto?

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ADHD Goten · Trick Member Joined: 16 Jun 2002 Location: Where am I?!

Hey look! Is that 1, or maybe even 2 korean girls on the girl team! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

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Saiyajin · Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2003 5:37 am Post subject:

Resident Lune · Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2003 5:57 am Post subject:

a_seal · Trick Member Joined: 28 Feb 2003

I like the new update, thats pretty good, and getting the girl to try on lengerie

I find it pretty good that he works at ben & Jerry's too ^o^

But, again, Dynamite needs some issues, he's still pretty one dimentional... (other than the fact that he doesnt know when he's hated)

he should have some deep dark fear of playing with like pets or something around because he stepped on some kids dog and almost killed it or something... that would be interesting...

also, I have the strangest feeling that team love remix and team wang are either gonna have a huge rivalry or some huge corny love thing happen...

and also, team wang's favorite songs,
Do me,
Deep in You,
Insertion,
So deep,
and The whistle song?

Thats so bad

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Jace · Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2003 10:01 am Post subject:

the whistle song = "blow my whistle"
it belongs in that list ;oD

the younger makoto · Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2003 10:31 am Post subject:

Wang is a common name in China. If I personally saw the name Team Wang, I'd think they were visiting from Beijing HOWEVER Lune is right, the boys are all american (except jeff, who's chinese-canadian)

so I have to say one thing right now:

Team Wang is exactly what they say...

I didn't make up any of their stats and most of their dialogue is directly from them too, (I let them revise the scripts to include things they'd actually say because, my mind just doesn't work like theirs... yet

)

but don't worry-- there's no corny love or weird rivalry at tenkay... Team Wang and LoveMagic Remix both serve a totally different purpose in the course of the tournament. I know some people don't like my storytelling, but you'll probably notice it's a bit off from a typical western cartoon. By the end of the tournament lots of things will have changed, but there's more to spring break than just hooking everybody up, na?

Snowstorm plays "The Whistle Song"... ironically since he might be the least likely to say "Blow my whistle"-- btw, don't jump to too many conclusions about that team till they're introduced... they're all great characters and I like them a lot which is why they're in my story... trust me on this

*edit: oh yeah! goten, I didn't stop using MSN, but I haven't been on MSN or AIM in like 3 weeks! whew!

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|\|isori · Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2003 2:51 pm Post subject:

all of the dudes form team wang got some serious issues on song choice. They are great songs and all but.....well ya know

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And all the girls in team love magic are cute

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Anyways, i like the second stage the lighting and colors are more attractive and it adds mood to the scenes.
BTW, i am finishing up you pic makoto and should have it done by wed. or thur. depending on what i have to do over the week.
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Resident Lune · Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2003 3:15 pm Post subject:

DJ_Dustbuster · Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2003 6:16 pm Post subject:

Did a little research on what this Whistle song was. Found the ddr version from some less than reputable ways and downloaded it. (Dont call the Cops I know them all in the area). Anyway I didnt know that that song was in DDR. I happen to have it on a mixed cd to some counter-strike stuff (mixed some techno and game sound effects) sounds awesome. Anyway I had to laugh at the censorship they used for the lyrics. At least they didnt slaughter the song too badly. (Not like the song was to foul just one word). Anyhow good song, listen to it in my car all the time and blast the hell outa it. Great for US 19 in traffic or no traffic when I can get my little ricer to fly.
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corporatesatan · Trick Member Joined: 20 Feb 2003 Location: Pittsburgh, PA

Proud to present..........TEAM WANG strait out of the Red Light District of China!!!

Represent Yo!

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the younger makoto · Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2003 12:17 am Post subject:

you know, Maizie on another board mentioned I should add text descriptions to the teams so I did, but they aren't really important for now anyway... those characters come in after this chapter is finished so I'm going back to drawing now... next update for chapter 2 is Sunday (after I move again)

nisori, draw whenever you like

no rush or anything until July-- then I'm leaving

so then you'll have to rush
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Romantic Boy · Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2003 1:21 am Post subject: Hmmmmm

Jace · Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2003 10:15 am Post subject:

Well Makato I really love this manga! But what I'm interested to know is how long have you been into drawing? Those characters look really neat, and whenever I *attempt* to draw my own orginal manga characters they look totally.... funny and deformed. In fact I can hardly draw anything without looking at something to copy from, it annoys me that my imagination isn't as good as most peoples.

Keep up the good work!

the younger makoto · Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2003 3:32 pm Post subject:

Violet, I'm headed back to Japan at the end of July (before school starts again in august) Back to Kyushu yahoo!

and Jace I've been drawing as far back as I can remember. I made lots and LOTS of really bad drawings too (even worse than these I mean!) but I kinda think that people have a number of bad drawings trapped inside them and the only way to get better is just to draw them and get them all out of the way, ya know?

Kinda like the 20-some times I must've failed Burning Heat before I finally learned it... (I love that song too) but those failures were all needed in order for me to get an A later... the bad drawings will all help you make better ones later so I hope you keep doing it, Jace

! it's fun
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Saiyajin · Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2003 11:10 pm Post subject:

Man... burning heat is hard to PA... I haven't AAed it yet at the arcade. >.< I think I'm gonna play it like... back to back until I finally AA it. X_x

Lucky... everyone gets to go to Japan... and to say "go back to Japan" is extremely fortunate. I suppose it would help if I spoke the language decently. Unfortunately... no. 4 years of American schooling is bull crap for Japanese... I need more. Hopefully my second year in College will prove to be better than the first... which I learned next to nothing in after 3 years of High school... Why they didn't let me go into Japanese 201.. I will never know. Oh well, easy 5 credits.

Yeah, totally... your drawings rock. (I've said this how many times now?) I really liked the update... I couldn't help but look at it... temptation kicked in before you could finish second stage. Heh... =D
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NAOKi SYNDROME · Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2003 8:56 am Post subject:

*reads comic*
*Blinkage*
*Jealousy gauge filling up...*
*Thinks: "My art sucks nadders"*
*Gets depressed...*
*Plays DDR...*
*A's So Deep, a little bit better feeling.*
*A's Cartoon Heroes, feel's decent...*
"Fails LOM on the last few steps... Gets crazy*
*Plays burning heat and A's... Feels terrible... Want's AA's*
*Reads about the teams in 10K, wants to make own group... But nobody is willing to be on team... Must show up everybody*
*Goes on insnae Max runs, doesn't pass a single one but gets really far...*
*Groans*
*Looks at Candy and fantasizes about a girlfriend some day...*
*Some how AAs Sweet Sweet Love Magic in his trance.*
*Blinkage*
"YEAh! Who owns you!"
*Thinks of possibilities of having a nickname that relates to SSLM... Bawls*
*Drools all over Makoto's comic again, and gets depressed...*
*Reads about scores..."
"ARGH! I need to put my scores up!*
*Pracitces Para Bros... Fails conitnuously on rebirth for some reason...*
*Decides to read up on comic and draw some more intead of crushing ego...*
*Reads...*
"Kakumei kid?! WHAAT?! Grrr... I'm the god of Kakumei! ARGH!!! Who else AA's that song on a drop of a hat?! Who... *Rambles about impromptu madness*"
*Goes to DDR and cranks on Kakumei, AA's again... Screams his head off because didn't get AAAs...*
*Decides to keep his reputation on AA-AAA's on Frozen Ray, White Lovers, Silent Hill, and other winter related songs...*
*Smiles with satisfaction and recites."
"I NEED A GROUP!!!"
*Smiles*
*Accidentally plays I Do I Do I Do...*
*Frowns*
"Screw the group... I wanna' girl..."
*Shrugs*

Hahah... That's what the 2nd episode did to me... In comic scetch format! (Yep, that's how I write my scripts... Crazy emotes from hell!)

Ahaha... if you live in Temecula, join Quadra Era! Don't care how much you suck... Just have personality... And We'll kick AAA's! Hah... I make joke!

*Wants group after all*

Japan is kinda' fun... Awesome to visit, sucks to "Viva." It balances out... I like America over all... (but I wish there were DDR machines every corner like in Japan... especially Tokyo!)

PS. I GOT A NEW BANNER! Yeahhhhhh!!! Sweeet! I hope nobody took my team name... They better have not! GRR!! It's mine! MINE I TELL YOU!!!!!!!
(Seriously, I want to keep this name...)
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NAOKi SYNDROME · Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2003 8:57 am Post subject:

*reads comic*
*Blinkage*
*Jealousy gauge filling up...*
*Thinks: "My art sucks nadders"*
*Gets depressed...*
*Plays DDR...*
*A's So Deep, a little bit better feeling.*
*A's Cartoon Heroes, feel's decent...*
"Fails LOM on the last few steps... Gets crazy*
*Plays burning heat and A's... Feels terrible... Want's AA's*
*Reads about the teams in 10K, wants to make own group... But nobody is willing to be on team... Must show up everybody*
*Goes on insnae Max runs, doesn't pass a single one but gets really far...*
*Groans*
*Looks at Candy and fantasizes about a girlfriend some day...*
*Some how AAs Sweet Sweet Love Magic in his trance.*
*Blinkage*
"YEAh! Who owns you!"
*Thinks of possibilities of having a nickname that relates to SSLM... Bawls*
*Drools all over Makoto's comic again, and gets depressed...*
*Reads about scores..."
"ARGH! I need to put my scores up!*
*Pracitces Para Bros... Fails conitnuously on rebirth for some reason...*
*Decides to read up on comic and draw some more intead of crushing ego...*
*Reads...*
"Kakumei kid?! WHAAT?! Grrr... I'm the god of Kakumei! ARGH!!! Who else AA's that song on a drop of a hat?! Who... *Rambles about impromptu madness*"
*Goes to DDR and cranks on Kakumei, AA's again... Screams his head off because didn't get AAAs...*
*Decides to keep his reputation on AA-AAA's on Frozen Ray, White Lovers, Silent Hill, and other winter related songs...*
*Smiles with satisfaction and recites."
"I NEED A GROUP!!!"
*Smiles*
*Accidentally plays I Do I Do I Do...*
*Frowns*
"Screw the group... I wanna' girl..."
*Shrugs*

Hahah... That's what the 2nd episode did to me... In comic scetch format! (Yep, that's how I write my scripts... Crazy emotes from hell!)

Ahaha... if you live in Temecula, join Quadra Era! Don't care how much you suck... Just have personality... And We'll kick AAA's! Hah... I make joke!

*Wants group after all*

Japan is kinda' fun... Awesome to visit, sucks to "Viva." It balances out... I like America over all... (but I wish there were DDR machines every corner like in Japan... especially Tokyo!)

PS. I GOT A NEW BANNER! Yeahhhhhh!!! Sweeet! I hope nobody took my team name... They better have not! GRR!! It's mine! MINE I TELL YOU!!!!!!!
(Seriously, I want to keep this name...)
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Naoki doll, comes in a billion different costumes like ZZ, kTz, NM, UZI-Lay, N & S, Naoki Undergound, RevenG and much, MUCH more!

NAOKi SYNDROME · Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2003 8:59 am Post subject:

*reads comic*
*Blinkage*
*Jealousy gauge filling up...*
*Thinks: "My art sucks nadders"*
*Gets depressed...*
*Plays DDR...*
*A's So Deep, a little bit better feeling.*
*A's Cartoon Heroes, feel's decent...*
"Fails LOM on the last few steps... Gets crazy*
*Plays burning heat and A's... Feels terrible... Want's AA's*
*Reads about the teams in 10K, wants to make own group... But nobody is willing to be on team... Must show up everybody*
*Goes on insnae Max runs, doesn't pass a single one but gets really far...*
*Groans*
*Looks at Candy and fantasizes about a girlfriend some day...*
*Some how AAs Sweet Sweet Love Magic in his trance.*
*Blinkage*
"YEAh! Who owns you!"
*Thinks of possibilities of having a nickname that relates to SSLM... Bawls*
*Drools all over Makoto's comic again, and gets depressed...*
*Reads about scores..."
"ARGH! I need to put my scores up!*
*Pracitces Para Bros... Fails conitnuously on rebirth for some reason...*
*Decides to read up on comic and draw some more intead of crushing ego...*
*Reads...*
"Kakumei kid?! WHAAT?! Grrr... I'm the god of Kakumei! ARGH!!! Who else AA's that song on a drop of a hat?! Who... *Rambles about impromptu madness*"
*Goes to DDR and cranks on Kakumei, AA's again... Screams his head off because didn't get AAAs...*
*Decides to keep his reputation on AA-AAA's on Frozen Ray, White Lovers, Silent Hill, and other winter related songs...*
*Smiles with satisfaction and recites."
"I NEED A GROUP!!!"
*Smiles*
*Accidentally plays I Do I Do I Do...*
*Frowns*
"Screw the group... I wanna' girl..."
*Shrugs*

Hahah... That's what the 2nd episode did to me... In comic scetch format! (Yep, that's how I write my scripts... Crazy emotes from hell!)

Ahaha... if you live in Temecula, join Quadra Era! Don't care how much you suck... Just have personality... And We'll kick AAA's! Hah... I make joke!

*Wants group after all*

Japan is kinda' fun... Awesome to visit, sucks to "Viva." It balances out... I like America over all... (but I wish there were DDR machines every corner like in Japan... especially Tokyo!)

PS. I GOT A NEW BANNER! Yeahhhhhh!!! Sweeet! I hope nobody took my team name... They better have not! GRR!! It's mine! MINE I TELL YOU!!!!!!!
(Seriously, I want to keep this name...)
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Naoki doll, comes in a billion different costumes like ZZ, kTz, NM, UZI-Lay, N & S, Naoki Undergound, RevenG and much, MUCH more!

Paix · Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 10:18 am Post subject:

Nice triple post.

Just a suggestion, but you might wanna put a little more realistic characters in there. 19 greats on Matsuri Japan is insane, and saying that he sucked afterwards is just -_-

Also, what teenagers have the time AND money to travel around from place to place playing DDR?

Nice though. Pie likes mucho!